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TOPIC TITLE: a poem i wrote on depression
Created On 10/28/14 6:11 PM
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wannabehappy21
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10/28/14 6:11 PM
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depression is an illness that affects the brain,
a terrible illness that makes you feel insane.
crying,cutting,cursing,things people may do.
there's more these are just a few.
depression is an illness that affects the heart,
a brutal illness that's very smart.
it knows how to pull you down when you want to enjoy your day,
it says hello to you i am here to stay.
its like a bee that stings and the aftermath it brings,
its like a snake that bites and the results a deadly sight.
whatever you try to do,
depression will go hand in hand with you.
you wish it would go away,
and leave you for just one day.
you cry and shout please leave me alone
i want to feel good in skin and bone.
talking,writing,sleeping may help,
eating,web-surfing,running,
relief may be felt.
so whatever you do you should know,
that depression is a lifelong illness and you gotta go with the flow.
just pray to hashem to help you, to send a med free cure,
then a new life you'll be able to adore.

i hope you like it. i have lots more to share if anyones interested.,
i just wanted some feedback.

thanks!
 
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keep climbing
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10/28/14 8:09 PM
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Wow! This poem is great! I had a really lousy day today, and was so glad to see it. Please share more. ( I also write poems)
 
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MoMo
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10/29/14 1:50 AM
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Thanks for sharing
 
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MoMo
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10/29/14 1:56 AM
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Here's my poem:

Roses are red violets are blue,
Some people know how to rhyme I don't.
;-)
 
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