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TOPIC TITLE: pain
Created On 1/21/12 11:26 PM
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1/21/12 11:26 PM
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I would love to hear anyones feedback on my poem.

tatte
what do you do
with all my pain?
do you hold it close to you,
waiting for the moment
to wash it all away?
tatte,
what do you do
with all of my pain?
tell me,tell me
is there anything
to gain
by putting me on
this never- ending train?
tatte,
what do you do
with all of my pain?
do my tears form clouds
in heaven above?
my throat is parched,
I'm waiting for
your blessed rain.


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there is light at the end of the tunnel
 
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1/28/12 8:17 PM
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gorgeous!!!!! I LUV IT!!!
I wish i cud write like that...
 
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1/28/12 11:41 PM
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thank you channa. I rly appreciate the encouragement


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